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ShadowGirl4
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2021-11-16 12:55

Awesome

The forgotten demigod

Valence_Wr
5.0
49 Chs

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Valence_Wr
Valence_WrAuthor

Reveal spoiler

3yr

abu_dabi
abu_dabiLv1

I like your writing style. Two things: The mc has all the memories of his mother or she 'imprinted' some knowledge on his head? And two, almost every name have a hidden meaning or its just a coincidence? For example Kall Sol: Kall= Kali, hindu goddess who is considered to be the master of death, time and change. It says that the mc will bring destruction and change to the cycle. And Sol= Ra, the god of egipt, that means sun, creator of everything. So, I assume that the mc will have the power of creation or life or something like that too? Anyway, the story seems good and original enouth, so please don't make it a harem or a murder hobo.

2yr
White_Witch_8875
White_Witch_8875Lv1

So, I saw your novel on Writing Oasis and gave it a try. It's awesome! Elf mc, slavery, love it! Also, Belladona is, by any chance, something like a cursed child? I'm super excited for her backstory! Keep up with the good work!

2yr
Shaltybf
ShaltybfLv1

I did some quick reading and I enjoyed it a lot. The MC being an elf is one of the reasons why I enjoyed it so much. Like, long black straight hair, purple eyes and a fit body? I NEED AN IMAGE OF HIM, NOW!

2yr
Only_Lolis
Only_LolisLv1

SO, in depth review time. Writing 4.7 / 5 The author don't has english as his main language for sure, so I could say that it's pretty good. There isn't any grotesque grammar error so far. Updates 5 / 5 It say at least two chapters a week, and he uploads more. Story development 4.8 / 5 I've read up to the chapter 12.3 (Lastest chapter atm) And thus, I'm satisfied with the curse of it. The MC isn't overpowered, and from what i've read, he is kinda weak actually. (I personally like weak and smart characters, so my judgment might be emotional rather than punctual. Character design 5 / 5 There isn't many info about the npc characters so far, but there is plenty of time for the author to explore it. I hope he do so. free 5 stars. World background 5 / 5 It seems like 'world' isn't a single planet or galaxy, but numerous universes. It is similar to cultivation novels, so more or less there isn't much information about it so far. At any rate, Ayon was a game that I loved back then, so you won me there. another free 5 stars Conclusion: Is it worth reading? Yeah, pretty much. Will you like it right on the beggining? Probably not. It takes a while to become interesting, probably because the author was learning how to write/Didn't knew what to write. At any rate, this is a lit 4.8 / 5. Hope our MC destroy the Temple asap. Have a nice reading, later!

2yr
Pingas_1406
Pingas_1406Lv1

Reveal spoiler

2yr
Pedro_Henrique_1208
Pedro_Henrique_1208Lv1

A fast and enjoyable read. I hope that he kills everyone later on. Keep up with the good work! Amazing book and i waiting for more. Thanks for this

2yr
DaoistRnVqPv
DaoistRnVqPvLv1

Props to the autor for revising the chapters gramar. The writing was bad, then average and now its good. The plot seem original and more or less a fast read 10-15 min per chapter. A really good novel. I hope that you dont quit writing, becuz this have a great potential.

3yr
Hallway_butcher
Hallway_butcherLv1

He's back! Thanks author, this novel is one of the best out there. Don't stop writing! I'll be here reading, no matter what.

2yr
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