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So after reading for some time I feel like it's time to give my two cents. I will not write a long review just some basic information this time, The story is good and somehow unique but you will find the action scenes lacking. Character designs is well done in my opinion. I find the MC cute. World background is a fantasy medieval setting that gives you a typical isekai feeling, It's not too bad with adventurers and stuff like taverns and etc, Update stability is good. Now as for the writing quality. Despite the people who previously praised it. Its actually bad to be honest. I spotted several grammatical mistakes and nonsense sentences. Aside from this, I will continue this story as it is still readable and I like it, however I can see why it's not popular as well.
My Girlfriend is an S-Class Adventurer
NandoFalske
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Hi, Leo! Thanks for your review and for reading this novel! Also, I saw that you are in the first few chapters and combining that with the fact that you noticed several errors, I wanted to ask if you work as a proofreader, I am negotiating with a few, but none have alerted me to the errors in the first few chapters and said they were fine.
Hi, no I don't work as a proofreader but don't worry. You didn't make many mistakes but only a few rather obvious ones instead. I'll point out some of them in the future if I find it again if that helps
NandoFalske:Hi, Leo! Thanks for your review and for reading this novel! Also, I saw that you are in the first few chapters and combining that with the fact that you noticed several errors, I wanted to ask if you work as a proofreader, I am negotiating with a few, but none have alerted me to the errors in the first few chapters and said they were fine.
If you would like, as I go through the novel, I'll put paragraph comments with fixes. It would be light tho as I'm not a professional. just suggestions from my end. would that be amenable to you?
NandoFalske:Hi, Leo! Thanks for your review and for reading this novel! Also, I saw that you are in the first few chapters and combining that with the fact that you noticed several errors, I wanted to ask if you work as a proofreader, I am negotiating with a few, but none have alerted me to the errors in the first few chapters and said they were fine.
Kaihwa:If you would like, as I go through the novel, I'll put paragraph comments with fixes. It would be light tho as I'm not a professional. just suggestions from my end. would that be amenable to you?
NandoFalske:Hi, Leo! Thanks for your review and for reading this novel! Also, I saw that you are in the first few chapters and combining that with the fact that you noticed several errors, I wanted to ask if you work as a proofreader, I am negotiating with a few, but none have alerted me to the errors in the first few chapters and said they were fine.