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2023-03-30 04:48

This was really great for the first couple hundred chapters, only a few complaints, the titular character isn't introduced until a ways in, and she doesn't become a romantic interest until even later, and once she does, it feels like she's just forgotten, sadly. The later chapters (300+) become a bit of a mess from my perspective, there's a time skip that happens and MC goes to a new place where a lot of new characters are introduced while almost none of the older ones are included anymore, even the romantic interests. It feels like as they were cemented into his 'harem' they fell prey to a common harem genre problem of being forgotten and left behind without development, so that new characters could be introduced, and I ended up not liking any of the new characters, and just found myself missing the older ones, and the time spent developing their relationships. Not going to tank the score of the review or anything, but this fell off pretty hard for me, which sucks because I loved the first 200 chapters, the story progressed nicely, the plot was intriguing, the girls were endearing love interests, well done across the board. It just took a turn down the road I didn't personally enjoy. Hasn't been an upload for about a month now, but if author decides to continue this, best of luck!

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