Blood_Fang

Tell me what y’all think of this chapters structure and fluidity compared to the others, I will adapt based on which is most liked

So it’s not a bad novel but it could have been executed a lot better. Nevertheless if one is bored I would still recommend it to them just this wouldn’t be the top recommendation. Thanks for the work though as it’s a lot better then some of the slop I see nowadays.

I still believe this at chapter 410

This is an amazingly well written novel. I’ve said this for other novels over my lifetime but I absolutely believe this is the best one yet. The two complaints I have is first their isn’t enough of the novel. Second the story is a little slow but only by a small margin and thanks to the “dragging” the emotions of the story are truly able to come to light. Furthermore I only felt it was a bit slow somewhere between chapter 150 to three hundred, and sometime between the little dragging I felt was eradicated. (Or so I believe, however every one has their own preferences so for some it could be fast for others it could be hellishly slow). Anyways author you really deserve props for this novel and I recommend this novel to anyone willing to read this comment.

... Peak ... Oh and not enough chapters ...

I absolutely despise this author because there is not enough of this novel. Anyways I would 100% recommend this book to any of which may see the review.

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May for take your soul im jot ready yet (Builds 30 ft underground base to fall inside a nuclear base and go boom) God: Who gives a truck. (God's answer to his question) I Don't give a truck i give man lightning shark and truck I am very generous (Side note - To your death)

oh but do you, I will look at your other novel and find out if that is true (don't fail me.)

This is a comment mainly for the author. I feel like the villain element is lacking as you say that this book will not lack villain atribute but a true villain would do things not even the devil would do athe main character in your book is held back by your morals as you let them be free for the most part but I cannot say that the main character is a true villain. I do have to aploud you 👏👏👏as you are doing a better job at displaying a villain like character than all the novel writer I have seen. You have not beat them by a small margin you bet them by a league. So this is a good novel but it just falls short of some of the expectations I have for the villain.