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This is not the first romance novel I've read on this site, and likely won't be the last. It's not the best and it's not the worst, and despite how that sounds, it's quite the compliment. The plot is fine. Basic, but fine. Looking at the characters, I don't really have much to say about them. However, I don't like the love triangle. Emir is creepy, and Jason is boring to read about. Emma does not stand out as a protagonist in any way. I also have to talk about the writing quality. It's... not good. Spacing is all over the place, and there are several occasions where entire words are missing from sentences. Grammar is poor, but I was at least able to figure out what was going on, which is a huge plus in comparison to many other novels that I've read. But despite all the stuff I've said, why's the score so high? Easy. While Emir is creepy, he's more engaging to read than many other protagonists from other books. More importantly, I was minorly invested while reading. I would however suggest running your chapters through Grammarly, or Wordcounter.net. It would make reading them significantly easier, and solve a large part of my issues with this book. 3.0/5-Not great, but it could be much worse.

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