Review Detail of Thunder_Blitz in Harry Potter: World on Fire

Plot and everything was good, there was just too much hermione, in general there is too much hype about her, think about it, everything she knows is from memorization, I don't actually find her smart, and as for the mc he remembers EVERYTHING as stated and is smart so would be ahead of hermione in everything from occlumency to theoretical knowledge about magic, the fact that you gave her such an important role and hype made me stop reading it, I might have continued, but the story before had the EXCACT same relationship between mc and her, from meeting, talking about how books can be wrong, to being the only friend they have, mc teaching her ALMOST EVERYTHING he knows, and SOMEHOW THE SAME THING ABOUT THE PROTEGO, which caused me to quit the last story due to its stupidity, I get that imagery is important, but perfect memory, amazing talent, and most importantly, the fact that at least a few of the books in the library would have a description of the spell.