Review Detail of Lord_Hallow in Harry Potter: World on Fire

I really like this novel, but the whole transfer to America to grab his key ruined it for me. They just went through how important it was for him to have Hermione around and not get wrapped up on complete search for power and then he goes and needs to transfer? I’ll most likely try reading again when you have more chapters and can skim through that part. I get that its a new concept, but i just dont think it fits in terms of the flow of the story. Especially with the deal he made with Dumbledore. It makes zero sense.