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2021-12-05 09:37

just started and its good. A little unusual writing style for webnovels but story is interesting enough. Keep it up. . . . . . . . . . . . .

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Mortrexo
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Chapter 53! I think I've read enough to make a review because the quality is constant Writing quality (5 stars): There are very little grammatical errors if any. This novel is not for people who have basic understanding of English because it uses a lot of sciences although in basic level, the wording is very technical sometimes. The writing is good, the concepts fresh, the cohesion fluid and the dialogues follow the common sense of that world and sometimes are hilarious. Is impressive compared with a lot of other novels in this website Stability of updates (5 stars): chapters daily, sometimes more. Story Development (4.5 stars-> 4 stars because there is not .5 in WebNovel): The story is like a snowball. The first chapter you have a shapeshifter with the ability to absorb genetic code that isn't able to use the powers of that world, meaning mana, and it has social phobia. On a side note it seems to be a little broken in the head *cough*. Then we get a unique backstory telling us that the shapeshifter is 3001 years old. After that in a chain of events well put together we start knowing more about the world, the races living within, social order, power structure and more and more. I won't spoil anything but I can tell you that if you give the story time it can develop into something interesting. The reason of the minus 0.5 is that the power level difference of each realm is a little vague. Character design (5 stars): What can I say about our beautiful, intelligent, cunning, broken murderer psychopath... She truly melts my heart *sniff*. *Chuckles* our MC is a 3000 year old being that has suffered A LOT, imagine living in a cultivation world as a mortal for 3000 years, yeah, you can go through some nasty events. Her personality although quirky she is extremely intelligent and the only times she shows her true self is with the FL named Foel. Foel entrance is not a typical one, she is slave catcher, meaning she catches people and then sells them to slavery. She is a Kudere with 450+ years behind her back. As you should have realized the main characters are Anti-hero like. Foel tries to catch our MC and well... it doesn't go well. They start in extremely bad foot by the MC forcing her (which Foel deserves for all she has done), the MC want to use her for her satisfaction but affections begin budding and well. that is how I met your mother right? The rest of the characters all have their own personalities from heroic to simply crazy, from extremely cunning to plain stupid. In short, we can see that there is a lot of work behind each character. World background (5 stars): If you tell me to describe the World background in one word it would be Deep. You may ask, what do you mean by Deep? We start in a realm, the we are introduced to gods, angels, hellspawns an entity that gives systems to some people, different energies, paths of cultivation, races, monsters (called calamities in this novel) and more. The thing is that the cultivation realms specially the later ones are not just I gather energy and Boom breakthrough. Nonono there are challenges that must be bested and a lot more. The habitants have their own culture, because of the type of world, they are not so adverse to killing well, there have been only 50+ chapters and I can speak about all of this you can get the idea of the work behind this novel. My personal opinion of this novel... Well, before, I tried to be objective yet you can see some personal bias so it goes without saying that I like it a lot. I hope that the author can go with this novel to the end. If you have read the review until here go read the novel. I really mean that it is worth it to at least give a try until chapter 10.

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