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Yokoyokai
YokoyokaiAuthor3yr
2021-10-30 12:53

Yo! Author's here! Most of us are familiar with the three states of matter: solid, liquid, and gas. But there are actually two dozen known states of matter. Plasma is one example, but scientists have also found other states of matter that only occur under certain conditions. And one of them are 'Strings', In this story, most of the bioengineered demi-human use metaphysical tentacles of their soul called "Consciousness Strings" to convert another smoll strings within the frequency of space that will generate energy when combined with the other of its kind. That energy was called "Mana', people gather them within their miniature realm called Athenaeum or just Mana Sea and cultivate them by making their center realm more earth-like to gather material for Golden Core construction! A nerdy cultivation that leans more on science fufu. But the world is unfair and the main character can't store this energy. So she use this tentacles of soul to rewrite her coding of life aka DNA or Genes instead, gathering the schematic of numerous Calamities and abomination to turn herself into an unkillable deity that will pass through all of those casual mana-farmer cultivators. That is the gist of the world, as for the story,, go check it out!

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Yokoyokai
YokoyokaiAuthor

Yes, the mc is the only one, and you can see the tag that I won't be adding a male love interest for the mc.

WillowWhisper
WillowWhisperLv11

Is that title a hamilton refrence

Yokoyokai
YokoyokaiAuthor

Yup, there will be more of em.

WillowWhisper:Is that title a hamilton refrence
origin_seth
origin_sethLv4

there is no cultivation tag. but when i see the chapters list, why the first thing i read in aux is about cult-ivasion. 😩😩

Yokoyokai
YokoyokaiAuthor

It is already mentioned in the sypnopsis and my review. MC didn't have any access to the mana cultivation, but almost everyone in the world is. The aux is for the reminder for ongoing readers, purposely.

origin_seth:there is no cultivation tag. but when i see the chapters list, why the first thing i read in aux is about cult-ivasion. 😩😩
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origin_seth
origin_sethLv4

well, is this cultivation or not ? whatever energy you use is, if there any cultivation vibe then i cant read it. im sorry,.

Yokoyokai:It is already mentioned in the sypnopsis and my review. MC didn't have any access to the mana cultivation, but almost everyone in the world is. The aux is for the reminder for ongoing readers, purposely.
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Lazy_NEET_Cat_UmU
Lazy_NEET_Cat_UmULv11

I would like to ask is it a har3m !???

Yokoyokai:Yes, the mc is the only one, and you can see the tag that I won't be adding a male love interest for the mc.
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Yokoyokai
YokoyokaiAuthor

Sadly, no

Lazy_NEET_Cat_UmU:I would like to ask is it a har3m !???
Yuri_Impact
Yuri_ImpactLv13

WHATEVER I JUST CAME HERHERE FOR YURI and for some interesting stuff...

Deku_Deku_3204
Deku_Deku_3204Lv3

Be more confident, remove sadly with of course, No !

Yokoyokai:Sadly, no
Dao_of_infinity
Dao_of_infinityLv15

Killer review. Love it.

TrevorTNT
TrevorTNTLv15

The thing is there is cultivation as a decent part of the story even if the character can't do it. Thus it should be tagged as such. It also helps those like me who like cultivation topic find your story even if the mc doesn't use it themselves.

Yokoyokai:It is already mentioned in the sypnopsis and my review. MC didn't have any access to the mana cultivation, but almost everyone in the world is. The aux is for the reminder for ongoing readers, purposely.
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Otaku_Daoist
Otaku_DaoistLv15

Good to know you’re a fellow Hamilton lover lol, it’s the title that. Roughy me here.

MegaSwampertGaming
MegaSwampertGamingLv4

... That took me WAYYY too long to understand. And I'm a Hamilton fan... Even read the comments here and still wasn't getting it...

DemonWolf_69
DemonWolf_69Lv4

Same

Yuri_Impact:WHATEVER I JUST CAME HERHERE FOR YURI and for some interesting stuff...
Yuri_Impact
Yuri_ImpactLv13

ummm, are u taking a break?!

OhAri
OhAriLv13

Is there yuri romance ?

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Mortrexo
MortrexoLv2

Chapter 53! I think I've read enough to make a review because the quality is constant Writing quality (5 stars): There are very little grammatical errors if any. This novel is not for people who have basic understanding of English because it uses a lot of sciences although in basic level, the wording is very technical sometimes. The writing is good, the concepts fresh, the cohesion fluid and the dialogues follow the common sense of that world and sometimes are hilarious. Is impressive compared with a lot of other novels in this website Stability of updates (5 stars): chapters daily, sometimes more. Story Development (4.5 stars-> 4 stars because there is not .5 in WebNovel): The story is like a snowball. The first chapter you have a shapeshifter with the ability to absorb genetic code that isn't able to use the powers of that world, meaning mana, and it has social phobia. On a side note it seems to be a little broken in the head *cough*. Then we get a unique backstory telling us that the shapeshifter is 3001 years old. After that in a chain of events well put together we start knowing more about the world, the races living within, social order, power structure and more and more. I won't spoil anything but I can tell you that if you give the story time it can develop into something interesting. The reason of the minus 0.5 is that the power level difference of each realm is a little vague. Character design (5 stars): What can I say about our beautiful, intelligent, cunning, broken murderer psychopath... She truly melts my heart *sniff*. *Chuckles* our MC is a 3000 year old being that has suffered A LOT, imagine living in a cultivation world as a mortal for 3000 years, yeah, you can go through some nasty events. Her personality although quirky she is extremely intelligent and the only times she shows her true self is with the FL named Foel. Foel entrance is not a typical one, she is slave catcher, meaning she catches people and then sells them to slavery. She is a Kudere with 450+ years behind her back. As you should have realized the main characters are Anti-hero like. Foel tries to catch our MC and well... it doesn't go well. They start in extremely bad foot by the MC forcing her (which Foel deserves for all she has done), the MC want to use her for her satisfaction but affections begin budding and well. that is how I met your mother right? The rest of the characters all have their own personalities from heroic to simply crazy, from extremely cunning to plain stupid. In short, we can see that there is a lot of work behind each character. World background (5 stars): If you tell me to describe the World background in one word it would be Deep. You may ask, what do you mean by Deep? We start in a realm, the we are introduced to gods, angels, hellspawns an entity that gives systems to some people, different energies, paths of cultivation, races, monsters (called calamities in this novel) and more. The thing is that the cultivation realms specially the later ones are not just I gather energy and Boom breakthrough. Nonono there are challenges that must be bested and a lot more. The habitants have their own culture, because of the type of world, they are not so adverse to killing well, there have been only 50+ chapters and I can speak about all of this you can get the idea of the work behind this novel. My personal opinion of this novel... Well, before, I tried to be objective yet you can see some personal bias so it goes without saying that I like it a lot. I hope that the author can go with this novel to the end. If you have read the review until here go read the novel. I really mean that it is worth it to at least give a try until chapter 10.

zuizui321
zuizui321Lv14
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