It's actually surprisingly good, as far as fanfiction goes. Even the raw mtl is surprisingly legible. I do have to agree with other posters though, that the sequence advancement is crazy slow. Ex. MC is seq. 9 at chapter 8, seq. 8 at chapter 27, seq. 7. at chapter 58, Sequence 6. at chapter 271, Sequence 5 at chapter 594, Sequence 4 at chapter 900, Sequence 3 at chapter 1077, and so on. It's definitely very drawn out.
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LIKEComing back for round 2 after finishing the story. It remains pretty good, I guess. This will be a review for the rest of the story, so spoilers etc etc.========OVERVIEW========= Towards the end of the story characters are more or less forgotten. It's expected. There were way too many hanging plot threads and it was inevitable that a 1600 chapter fan project would at some point have a mistake or two. Ultimately, I enjoyed it, despite some parts being excessively slow. ==========RELATIONSHIPS===========Oh boy. The relationships. How do I describe this. The MC is the rizzler. The waifu warrior. The man with the world's biggest harem. Women. Female characters. Every single one of them is part of the harem. If there is a female character that appears in more than like 5 chapters, they're inevitably going to be part of the harem. Audrey and Sharron are safe, but MC has the powers to get with everyone and anyone else. Bro bones Lilith, bro bones Evernight, bro bones Xio and Fors and Melissa and Bernadette. He's got the magic touch. Even witches are part of the harem.========PLOT(SPOILERS)======== The plot gets very muddled towards the end, there's this whole metaplot about how the MC is actually a clone of an outer god that's trying to steal sephirot, and he's actually the ninth or tenth clone, with all of the other instances of himself being huge figures throughout history. He beats his original self by jumping straight from sequence 2 to sequence 0 by literally just. Making up a sequence 0 somehow. And then he kills all of the evil gods and becomes above the sequence of a sequence group he just invented. I'd bump the rest of the story down to a 3/5 but my original review was just for the parts that were currently up, not the other 1300 chapters.
