Review Detail of VisualKoFey in Transmigrated into a Novel: Payne Gale, The Villain's Spouse

A good start so far. I hope the story can focus more on what the MC is doing as it can help readers understand better what is happening around the MC, but other than that, the story makes you want to know what is going to happen next. Overall, I recommend anyone finding this story to take their time and give this story a go.