Review Detail of Viduus in The Grounded Citizens

overall I like the concept of the story, but I can't get past the "am sorry" "am Arthur". to my knowledge no one talks like that, or atleast not in English language. also there are no idea of changing locations. I mean like nothing noting that the scene has changed until a name or something is mentioned. I didn't read past chaptor 3 because I couldn't stand the " am" thing, I keep thinking all the characters are mentally challenged. maybe later chaptors get better but I will never know. I started this because the reviews said high writing quality, which is false.