Viduus
of reading
661
Read books
I took it his mom died the day of testing and he couldn't focus on the test so he scored pourly
first thing, great story and writing so far. so close range style archer sounds cool on the surface but is totally illogical. example as will be able to block a melee weapon with a bow, that's kinda sad if so. maybe he becomes the greatest player and can dodge/avoid every attack ever, also sounds kinda sad. logical time it would take to draw and aim for a bow, a sword would have already cut him in half. maybe he is that great but that just means every melee player just sucks that much more which is kinda sad. I have lots of questions but was gonna hold off till I see how you wrote it out and hoped it wasn't whack. I like the uniqueness of the story, most mcs in stories use swords or magic so this is a freshness to things.
the first line of the story has a misspelled word. I noticed atleast 3.
honestly so far it is a little confusing. he is comparing himself (who is level 15 I think) to the alpha team who are level 1. as far as stats go. he should be slightly stronger maybe, but he has way more skills. the way it's been written so far skills don't mean much in the way of fighting if your Stats are lacking. so for now he should be on par with alpha class but once they start to level he is basically done for. so unless he gets a better class or some divine thing happens he should go back to being the weakest link out of everyone.
I think your right, a teenager would have their hormones going all wacky. if he didn't think of any girls, it would be suspicious tbh
idk, but something has to happen. at how the author wrote this. no matter how many skills he has, he will get passed by everyone else with a class. like 100 plus s rank skills are worthless if there is no power behind them. if something doesn't happen for him to get a class or something the story is gonna get ridiculous
I was thinking so far maybe it will be kinda like shield hero anime. the dragons are not so bad and were done dirty by humans.
I have read to chaptor 140 also the aux chaptor. sadly that is as far as I will read,the writing is awesome, the plot is very nice and all but one character is nicely done. the mc erix is very messy and his whole class/skills/powers are just whacky and honestly don't go together at all. his powers feels very pushed and not in sync at all. rin and the other women seem very thoughtful and flow nicely. last but not least the author turned erix into a rapist, the women are just like totally cool about it also. so that alone would have made me not read the story alone, wish I had known sooner. overall besides those 2 major problems, everything is very topnotch and written very well. I wish the author good luck.
honestly I am happy about erix dying and starting over. his skills are so boring, I hope his necro skill thing goes poof as well. his skills and such are so confusing, he is melee and a rocket launcher gun thing. his skills just didnt mesh well at all together .rin and Bella are very nicely written though with nice skills.