Review Detail of BrewingFantasies in Incubus' Blood Harem
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[MUST READ | INSIGHTS] [Dated: 10 March, 2022] - There's no [y- u- r- i] and [y- a- o- i] or [r- a- p- e] or shar-ing wives of MC. No non con-sen-sual stuff, gree-n hat or similar things. - MC will have a few wives of all kinds qnd realms. Although there won't be mind-less ban-ging and swoo-ning girls. - Medusa and Malcolm belong to Kayden as his blood serv-ants. Medusa and Kayden are a ship. However there's no intim-ate scene between Malcolm and Kayden. - The book has s- m- u- t but there's a strong plotline too. So better not read if you just wanna j- a- c- k off, although the scenes are good. (In my opinion, LOL!) - Give me pointers about typing err-ors and odd stuff in paragraph comments. I do read and correct them. Feel free! - If your comment is providing mis-information (not spoil-ers) then don't expect it not to be dele-ted. Don't bo-ther investing time in spa-m- ming. - Lastly, if you're an old reader who started this book before March 2022 then I assure you there had been tons of changes in plotline. And the current version is new and better. For new readers, just go for it first to decide.
Incubus' Blood Harem
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Where did you spot these comments? I've deleted all the comments related to previous version. And no, no green hat or similar stuff. It will be mc speaking but that's too far yet to come.
Malcolm_Massey:so I saw a comment about ntr and the MC wearing a green hat. can you tell me if the ntr is the MC taking another person's wife or does the MC lose a wife?
Oh that one! But no, there's no green hat or anything similar. It contained before but I had to delete the chapters and start from point zero by changing plotline. And it was worth it, the current version came out well. It's mainly romance fused sm- ut, mind games, strong plotline behind, and tons of action. It's not a plain j- a- c- k off book despite it's a ha-rem.
Malcolm_Massey:it was posted on the review from kuro shinigami.
Not anymore but be careful the author seems to have those tendencies as he fought tooth and nail to keep it in but eventually got rid of it. Even after the rewrite he tried to keep it in and when he was called out on it he made some nonsensical excuses until the pressure built up where he couldn't take it. Take works like Guild Wars as an example, if an author does it once nothing is stopping them from doing it a second time or even a third, even if they try to make it acceptable, and that is exactly what this author did once already by not directly stating the NTR and being vague thinking the readers aren't smart enough to understand what he implied and then claiming he never explicitly stated the NTR happened and it might not have, even though the heroine licked another man's face before their "breath intertwined".
Malcolm_Massey:so I saw a comment about ntr and the MC wearing a green hat. can you tell me if the ntr is the MC taking another person's wife or does the MC lose a wife?
Basically what happened once can happen twice and what happened twice has a high probability of happening a third time.
Malcolm_Massey:so I saw a comment about ntr and the MC wearing a green hat. can you tell me if the ntr is the MC taking another person's wife or does the MC lose a wife?
FunnyBuns:Not anymore but be careful the author seems to have those tendencies as he fought tooth and nail to keep it in but eventually got rid of it. Even after the rewrite he tried to keep it in and when he was called out on it he made some nonsensical excuses until the pressure built up where he couldn't take it. Take works like Guild Wars as an example, if an author does it once nothing is stopping them from doing it a second time or even a third, even if they try to make it acceptable, and that is exactly what this author did once already by not directly stating the NTR and being vague thinking the readers aren't smart enough to understand what he implied and then claiming he never explicitly stated the NTR happened and it might not have, even though the heroine licked another man's face before their "breath intertwined".
FunnyBuns:Basically what happened once can happen twice and what happened twice has a high probability of happening a third time.
A mix of boredom and laziness honestly. Was curious if you were BS'ing again and since I have many works in my library I have no intention to read but am too lazy to take out naturally yours is here too. My library got especially large after I was doing those gift announcements that gave fast passes and other things.
BrewingFantasies:Quite diligent, eh. Keep it up! đ
FunnyBuns:A mix of boredom and laziness honestly. Was curious if you were BS'ing again and since I have many works in my library I have no intention to read but am too lazy to take out naturally yours is here too. My library got especially large after I was doing those gift announcements that gave fast passes and other things.
I'd like to correct "it's called inspired not stolen." Also Victor knows I used this theme from his work. Lastly, I stole it (in your perspective) then all existing books are stolen. Especially cultivation cliche plots.
Clayton_Edwards:this novel plot about his blood was stolen from Victor wiessmanns novel (my three wives are beautiful vampires)
BrewingFantasies:I'd like to correct "it's called inspired not stolen." Also Victor knows I used this theme from his work. Lastly, I stole it (in your perspective) then all existing books are stolen. Especially cultivation cliche plots.
however I do agree with you on cultivation novels there to played out be original. there are millions of cultivation novels to many to count and you hardly see any that have a plot that doesn't reach God level and for no reason at all just because the cultivator wants to. BUT WHY all cultivator books say to reach the top there is no top period so yeah there played out...
I don't think there's any need for it, when both author knows. Also, taking one single thing from a book doesn't make the two works same/similar or any plagiarised. I don't see any problem here tbh.
Clayton_Edwards:then where is the inspired by the facts of this novel in the discription
I dropped the previous version wherein Malcolm and Medusa have a physical relationship before MC(a huge turn off), it's makes me upset and disappointed. So I have a question Author before I read this rewritten work of yours. -Does Malcolm and Medusa still have a physical relationship (past relationship) before introducing to MC as servants? or Does Medusa has some relationship with others in the past before introducing to MC?
BrewingFantasies:I don't think there's any need for it, when both author knows. Also, taking one single thing from a book doesn't make the two works same/similar or any plagiarised. I don't see any problem here tbh.
(Medusa Ă Kayden) are a ship. Medusa has no physical intimacy with anyone else, not even before Kayden. Although before biting Kayden she used to feed on life force (by just touching, handshake) also the initial 10 chapters are same (with minor changes removing previous odd scenes)
DoubleFacedManX_69:I dropped the previous version wherein Malcolm and Medusa have a physical relationship before MC(a huge turn off), it's makes me upset and disappointed. So I have a question Author before I read this rewritten work of yours. -Does Malcolm and Medusa still have a physical relationship (past relationship) before introducing to MC as servants? or Does Medusa has some relationship with others in the past before introducing to MC?
BrewingFantasies:I'd like to correct "it's called inspired not stolen." Also Victor knows I used this theme from his work. Lastly, I stole it (in your perspective) then all existing books are stolen. Especially cultivation cliche plots.