This story is really well written and the flow is pretty good. It's an interesting story i would recommend. Writing quality was really good. The background was set up nicely. The development did kind of become a typical shounen troupe after a while but main character was interesting enough to keep me committed to finishing the story. All in all, it's a story I'd say you should definitely give this story a shot!

57 chapters and we still don't see the protagonist's progress, the story is boring and smooth from chapter 37 onwards it's almost a copy of the canon just that with another character the very disappointing truth ..

Full disclosure, I have only read up to chapter 55. The grammar /writing quality is pretty good, to be honest really high by this sites standards. Updates also seem to be pretty stable and chapters are of a decent length each so no problems there for me. Start development, now this hurts to say ok, but as far as I have read most of the story is just a revthread of arifureta with a somewhat different mc with different powers. Most scenes aren't original, though the few that are are done decently. This is just like that avenger arifureta fan fic as in they both follow the original scene by scene, though the avengers one even more so than this one. If you haven't read arifureta then it should be enjoyable, but if you have it's like re reading that book all over again just with it being less edgy. I wish things were more original, I really do, but to add on yo that the mc seems to be weaker than what the original Hagime was at the point of the story I stopped at with the intro of Teo. The mc has such an amazing ability with his alchemy but it is barely explored at all, how the he'll is he a researcher?,he has barely even scratched the surface if what could be done, but he just calls it a day... Mc isn't too smart or dumb, he kind of leans both ways though more towards dumb for comedic purposes. Also I just hope that the adopted daughter and her mother from the original book don't have anything to do with the mc, like whyyyy would he adopt some girl and get into a relationship with her extremely normal mother. If you want cuteness get a pet instead of a daughter that isn't actually yours and a mother who hascexperience with someone else. That was one of the things that stumped and annoyed me the most in the original and I hope it doesn't happen here again. Also, the stat/skill plate exists, the author seems to try to make you forget about it since the last time the mc s srats were shown was like chapter 10 and I'm on chapter 55. It's not that hard ok, just summarise reasonable stats and skills, what's so hard about it? Still salty that the mc is weaker than the original arifureta mc. Character design is OK since most of the characters are copy pasted from arifurets since it's a fanfic Same with world background. Could have been so much better if the author took some creative liberty, rather than going scene by scene after the original. Why does this have to keep happening with every arifureta fic. I feel like this isn't made for arifureta fans, the more you know about the original the less you like this since it's just too similar, I came to read a fanfic not a rewrite with a slightly different mc, but you know what I got. Too bad, hahhh

Ugh i am very disapointet in the story there is no status plate that let you see the progress of the mc and there is no monster meat that gives you monstrus boost in stats and a mana manipulation skill that is nedet for the things that the mc can do but he schouldn‘t have like the mana hands for transmutation ect the story progress is ….. eh yea i don‘t want to talk about it and mc armor…. He is an f…… alchemyst not a warior why does he need cringe as f.c. Armor something akin too haijmes or something alike would be good but no !!! This was very very disapointing he ist even using the full potential of transmutation ect he could macke explosion potion magic guns ect but he needs mana manipulation a skill that can only be atained by eting a monster …..

Nice fic in general. Stable update schedule and a good story plot line. As well as the different alchemic powers and ideas the mc has and I like his character quite a lot- not as edgy as most webnovel mcs

The idea for the story is great. But sadly the mc ruins it all for me, interesting concept with alchemy however the author utilizes it in a way that keeps the mc as weak as possible. The original novel had a mc with strong power and a strong mind who literaly carried the entire world to victory against the evil god. While this mc is the opposite, weak of will, redicilously low strength with almost zero improvements over the course of the novel and just plain stupid as the author makes him so. Everything Hajime breezed through while having a much worse start than our mc is a deathly experience for the mc to the point where even a small group of ordinary soldiers takes a great amount of fanfare and consumeables to beat. Simply put this ff is the same as the original but with a weak and stupid mc. Only read for those who like novels where the mc is carried by sidecharacters and stays weak and stupid for like 100 chapters with zero development

Interesting premise, hopefully the Alchemy ability will be similar to the one in FMA. Other than that, the spellings need some work, the "Alcehmist" in the title is misspelled

very good one of the best Arifureta fanfictions in my opinion

Logical, not contrived, and I don’t feel like it’s getting out of hand in anyway like the author lost the pace of the novel and it’s either going to fast or to slow. The only thing I want more of is epic action scenes and downright despairing hail Mary levels of leaps of faith because I wanna see some huge epic surprising transmutations done the behemoth had some of it but not enough Oh yeah pain he needs to get hurt in someways you can’t expect him to just flawless the whole thing. Actually losing might be good character growth he has taken what he would consider a W in every fight or altercation. A Lot of authors miss that and just go for plot armor instead.