Review Detail of GrimmReedr in Unbound Familiar

I am by no means some sort of literary scholar or anything of the sort, but I will convey my feelings on this story to the best of my ability. At the beginning, it showed a lot of potential. The world of ’Familiar of Zero’ is one not commonly written about. It was entertaining to see the main character, Michael’s, growth in power and personality as the story went on. A boy who after suffering multiple betrayals feels both angry and indignant at the world around him, lashing out at its unfairness. I do feel that the relationship with Louise could have been handled better though, and after her own revenge arc against Michael she could have gone through some sort of redemption arc afterwards. It would have suited her better, in my opinion. The power system is intriguing and well-balanced in my opinion, gradually ramping up until an inevitable climax. It’s origin was similarly fantastic, making a decent amount of sense (which is uncommon in most fanfictions) and overall leaving the reader (me) satisfied. If I had to say one bad thing about this fanfiction, I would say that it has a lot of untapped potential. There were many missed opportunities that could have ended up enhancing the story as a whole. Michael’s eventual return after his departure from the world of ‘Familair of Zero’ from Skyrim, the invasion of Daedra to other worlds and the subsequent hunt to find them, and the relationships between Michael and various side-characters that could have been made into interesting and riveting stories had the author put more time into their interactions. Overall, it is a relatively well-written story and definitly worth the read.