Review Detail of InDominus in Gems of the Desert

For starters, grammar is actually good which is a win in my book. The first few chapters might be considered slow, but it passes as an introduction and the story only picks up from there. (I would know as I was allowed to read the prewrite). I may be a little biased but I promise you won’t regret giving this a read thanks to the world building that actually puts a picture in your head of what’s going on, and the personalitIes of the characters that actually make sense!