For starters, grammar is actually good which is a win in my book. The first few chapters might be considered slow, but it passes as an introduction and the story only picks up from there. (I would know as I was allowed to read the prewrite). I may be a little biased but I promise you won’t regret giving this a read thanks to the world building that actually puts a picture in your head of what’s going on, and the personalitIes of the characters that actually make sense!

Which novel?

Thanks for the chapters!

Thanks for the chapters!

Thanks for the chapters!

While I did enjoy Landlord’s persona, gotta say Felix being himself is definitely the most entertaining

This story is really going places, thanks for the chapters author!

Man, just when I thought things were going well we get even better insight on what happens next for Felix

Story only got more promising from here, you never cease to amaze us author!

Chapters were great as always, keep up the good work!

What a way to keep readers wanting more. Thanks for the chapters, as always!

Thanks for the chapter 👍

Thanks for the chapters!

Thanks for the chapters! Great ending to the game too!

Ramadan Mubarak, thanks for the chapters!

Thanks for the chapter, Felix has yet to disappoint!

Finally caught up again after all this time lol. Keep up the great work

Oh man are those guys screwed. Imagine having found alien tech and being assigned to figure out how to activate it, only to have it disappear just like that. Big find for Alex though!

I gotta say, that save must have been very cool to watch

Thanks for the chapter!