Item: You Are My Omega
Rating: 2.6
Author: PhoCham

PhoChamLv132yr

2022-12-14 14:44

If you are going to base your world in the medical field, having your MC be a famous surgeon, the majority of the main characters be in the medical field, then at least do your homework. Get familiar with medical terminology and at least the basics of biology, pregnancy, etc. You state that you have absolutely no understanding of medicine, then WHY WOULD YOU BASE YOUR WORLD/FOCUS ON MEDICINE, THE COMPLEX FIELD OF SURGERY, AND HAVE MOST OF YOUR STORY REQUIRE KNOWLEDGE OF PREGNANCY/OBSTETRICS?! Crazy! If you’re going to do so, then DO RESEARCH. That’s how serious, dedicated, and professional writers operate. While you have some great ideas and know how to write face-slapping dog-blooded romance (you have amazing ideas), your technique lacks professionalism. Don’t mean to be a total downer, because you have great potential. I just think a lot of it is wasted in over simplified grammar, lack of details, and a setting where you lack knowledge/understanding so are setting yourself up for criticism. Good luck.

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Jenna_Marie_Sabino

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JMS_SweetiekyokoLv12

Thank you for your honest review and would keep that in mind. 😊

2yr

Aptpence71Lv15

Hi, Jenna! We’ve missed you! I hope you long absence isn’t due to such strongly harsh criticism! The all caps keyboard yelling was not necessary to get a constructive critique across. I do hope all is ok, and I will wait for your updates to the story as long as it takes, but would you mind at least providing occasional “I’m okay” comments so we won’t worry about your well-being too much? Your well-being is way more important, so please just let us know you’re doing ok, or need some virtual love and encouragement!! 💜🙏🏾

JMS_Sweetiekyoko:Thank you for your honest review and would keep that in mind. 😊

2yr

Marie_AgnantLv13

Hi how are you doing, I hope you and your family are doing good 😊

Aptpence71:Hi, Jenna! We’ve missed you! I hope you long absence isn’t due to such strongly harsh criticism! The all caps keyboard yelling was not necessary to get a constructive critique across. I do hope all is ok, and I will wait for your updates to the story as long as it takes, but would you mind at least providing occasional “I’m okay” comments so we won’t worry about your well-being too much? Your well-being is way more important, so please just let us know you’re doing ok, or need some virtual love and encouragement!! 💜🙏🏾

1yr

Gbaixinha_01Lv14

I agree with you, we were talking about the authors well-being in another forum as well, no one knows the struggles and health condition other people are facing, so I hope it is just a long vacation

1yr

Anusa96Lv13

Hello ,are you there ?where are you? What happened to you?are you ok ?😪

JMS_Sweetiekyoko:Thank you for your honest review and would keep that in mind. 😊

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