PhoCham

How the hell is any of this a spoiler?! Phishing!

I’m sorry, but when your title and opening summary have gross grammatical mistakes, I can’t even start. Being “Captivated” and being held “captive” are two entirely different things!

This rating is the lowest for this book, only because there are only the beginning chapters available so I can’t honestly give it a 5/5 for every category because it’s too soon to say so. I really hope this author continues writing the same quality throughout because then it’s a 5 for every category. Nice job author. I got hooked immediately !

How so?

Didn’t think I’d like it so ,fun but I got sucked right in and read until the end of the available chapters. fun little article. Keep updating!

Good ideas, but aver completion. Tons of plot holes - why did the entire subject of tge MC having transmigrated to that world. Completely ignored the subject. Pills for changing body from male to female. The idea of forced gender identity is still abuse even when gender switched. His parents, ok particularly mom, are disgusting in their sexism. I wou have been suprised if tge mother committed infanticide because she gave borth to a boy. She was willing to kill the midwife just for knowing the baby was a boy. Them forcing her son to basically have a medical procedure (ok SUPER hormone pills here), have an arranged marriage against his will, basically become a homosexual AND TRANSEXUAL, then forced pregnancy. The mother uses brainwashing, threats with actual violence, monitoring, makes choices for her son that change his entire being without his knowledge or consent, and finally uses moral kidnapping & filial piety to force her will on her son. I find all the ideas of this comic & how presented not funny at all, but rather fri ghteningly tragic and scary how tge mother’s midset wins out & a person is forced to chsnge his entire being against his will and knowledg. The reason tge MC is so grest is he constantly is trying to retain his self, gender, and rights the entire time. Only the audience knows he’ll never survive as a boy and get to live as a man. Aad.

If you are going to base your world in the medical field, having your MC be a famous surgeon, the majority of the main characters be in the medical field, then at least do your homework. Get familiar with medical terminology and at least the basics of biology, pregnancy, etc. You state that you have absolutely no understanding of medicine, then WHY WOULD YOU BASE YOUR WORLD/FOCUS ON MEDICINE, THE COMPLEX FIELD OF SURGERY, AND HAVE MOST OF YOUR STORY REQUIRE KNOWLEDGE OF PREGNANCY/OBSTETRICS?! Crazy! If you’re going to do so, then DO RESEARCH. That’s how serious, dedicated, and professional writers operate. While you have some great ideas and know how to write face-slapping dog-blooded romance (you have amazing ideas), your technique lacks professionalism. Don’t mean to be a total downer, because you have great potential. I just think a lot of it is wasted in over simplified grammar, lack of details, and a setting where you lack knowledge/understanding so are setting yourself up for criticism. Good luck.

I really like the smooth flow of this novel. It has more details and is written better than the majority of novels. The characters and stories make you keep reading and wanting more.

The author has another novel once again using these names for the MC & ML.

I like it better when the men don’t turn into idiot love brains every time. It’s too juvenile and easy. Why is Astrid becoming an incubus with a harem of birds & bees? I still don’t see a serious genius level soldier becoming a shy idiot who loses his reasoning over a pretty face with a heinous reputation and serious problem with not knowing the concept of personal space, is famous for being handsy & clingy, and a filter between his mouth & brain.