hello. I'm not a fan of action actually, but I'll try my best to give you a review of what I read from your book. your writing quality is quite good as you always try to correct me, and thank you. the story development is also good so I give you 5 stars. for character design here I talk about the cover. the font is not quite clear so maybe you can try another font or maybe change the cover? it is up to you. and please update regularly because your readers may wait for you. don't take it too seriously, because I just want to be honest about my perspective to you. well done, author. keep on writing and bless you! ^_^
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