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Bloom759
Bloom759Lv143yr
2022-01-10 17:21

8 is quite a unique name. I don't know if it was pun intended, but the 8 really looks like an infinity sign when placed horizontally. Him being an immortal, I hope he does get stronger and doesn't easily get into danger/captured like in first few paragraphs. I personally like bucket head. His description was a hilarious one. When you realize your saviour isn't really s knight in shining armour but a knight in bucket head description (read to find out 🤣) I hope the clause of sentence breaking could be addressed, this way readers don't get too confused. As too much are going on in one paragraph. All in all it was a good read!

8 The Infinite

Cynical_Stranger
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4 Chs

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Cynical_Stranger
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Thank you, I chose the name 8 only because it is the infinity symbol on its side. I wanted a name fit for an immortal. It is like the Ouroboros, symbolizing cycle of life, death, and rebirth (that is sometimes depicted as the infinity symbol). Very fitting for a character that is literally stuck in a cycle of diying and coming back to life. About the long paragraphs and sentences, I see what you mean. I have a bad tendency to just write things in one continuous burst. Some times the meaning of the santance or paragraph is lost to the reader that way. I will try to improve that in the futher.

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Bloom759
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I'm glad you took my criticism well 😅

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