The starting is a bit weird, but storytelling is top tier. One thing I gotta mention is when the story is in 1st person POV, it's too good, the description, the monologue are totally amazing. But when it sometimes comes to 3rd person POV, the motion stumbles, description gets confusing. The comedy and action is well balanced. Last but not the least, the upload speed seems a bit slow. Overall it's going very well, keep it up.
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