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Arizona_Montana
Arizona_MontanaLv1512mth
2024-01-16 06:47

I love this story. But the you keep switching genders and sometimes the sentences don’t make any sense. Maybe it improves later on as I read more but for now it needs some work

Another World Chronicles

Dimas_Pratama
4.9
256 Chs

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Dimas_Pratama
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Thanks for critique. Actually i want to use consistent such as hiro and allen as he. while Yumi and Rina as She. Anyway thanks again for correction

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