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VoidReader8577
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I have read 50 chapters of this book but I was forcing myself after chapter 5. There is absolutely no flow to the story at all. We go from our MC being reincarnated into a 11 year old body to fighting off Mafia in NY, Saving Tony from Afghan, befriending and fighting the X-Men, Going to the Harry Potter Universe, Providing Magical products from the HP universe to the entire world, and having OFA from MHA. Lets not forget how this 11 year old kid that barely did anything in his past life now has a university level education while still being in middle school. Its just so confusing. This story is legit impossible to follow. There are so many mash ups from different marvel universes and its really annoying. It also gets so confusing how he turns into the different templates so he has like 3 identities now. Another thing is that we don't really see the MC getting used to the powers of the templates. He just kinda knows how to do it in the following chapters. There is literally NO PASING AT ALL. There are also tons of typos and because there are so many side characters, they all feel so one dimensional. If you want to give this story a try then go ahead but me personally, I am dropping this story at chapter 50

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Yuinetro
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Hi, thanks for the review. I don’t know how to solve this, you’re basically asking to change the author’s writing style. It’s done before, I tried and many didnot like it.

Thehighest_throne2
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and the most annoying thing is that writers like to drag stories, most stories like this will bore readers

Aztec_Azazel
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i bet a few years from now when the author reads his novel again he will be so Cringed, 😂😂

Aztec_Azazel
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but admit it yourself, its really cringe 😂

Yuinetro:Hi, thanks for the review. I don’t know how to solve this, you’re basically asking to change the author’s writing style. It’s done before, I tried and many didnot like it.