your mc is too human and if this story wasn't a super hero fanfic it would be a simply great mc but it's a super hero fanfic and in this fanfic your mc's personality is shit you'll see the story I like the templates that Many fight, I don't care, but in this story I could replace your mc with another from completely different stories and they would still be better mcs in your story and that says a lot of bad things about your mc.
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