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You know when I read a review and I see that the mc is going to be very powerful from the beginning, what I hope is that it continues to be like that because what I hate the most is being told, look, my mc is the best so that later, since they don't know how to write, they want to repeat it. what happens in the canon so the mc, despite being very powerful, can't do anything
your mc is too human and if this story wasn't a super hero fanfic it would be a simply great mc but it's a super hero fanfic and in this fanfic your mc's personality is shit you'll see the story I like the templates that Many fight, I don't care, but in this story I could replace your mc with another from completely different stories and they would still be better mcs in your story and that says a lot of bad things about your mc.
the mc looks like those emos who were for mida but more radical in his life there was not a tragedy of such magnitude as to have the personality he has, it was simply like that and the author no matter how many you ask him, you never answer why his is like that personality
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I realized that there are two types of comments on this story, those from people who don't like me anymore and those who don't like me anymore but keep telling the author that his novel is good simply because they don't have anything else to read and they don't want the author to abandon the novel