Review Detail of onedaysomedayy in Dimensional Overhaul

This is a great read! The grammar is neat, fluent in details, and shows a variety in character development. It’s always a nice touch when there’s a sense of realism revolving around a character’s beginning of abstaining strength/power. The action-packed chapters are marvelous with crisp details that paint the scenes. It’s hard finding a story that depicts a battle, and the challenges a character faces without being rushed. This is splendid. 5/5