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2022-03-12 22:45

You have a good command of English for your creation and your detailed description I envy most as I'm not fond of long paragraphs of describing anything.

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Dimensional Overhaul is one of the few novels that I actually took my time to invest in and read. I found it in my recommendation below my novel, underneath the category "You may also like", and decided to give this novel a try. (The Synopsis was gripping.) From the start, the world automatically has this untameable grip on you, immediately pulling and tossing you into a relentless, harsh, and bitterly cold setting of snow-covered mountains after the vague explanation that was made in the Prologue. It is as if by reading, your emotions can connect to the character and their abrupt transport into this awe-gripping world from the start, showing you the flow of life and the ways of living of the characters. The words construed upon this piece are one to take note of, as in every sentence and description, you can vividly fabricate this image inside your head and follow it through; maybe reinforcing it by the descriptions the author shares to grant this overall immersive style. I for one take full inspiration of this, and hopefully I will be able to replicate it in my works. But that shouldn't be one of your worries. In Dimensional Overhaul, you can HEAR the world, you can SEE the world, listen to its characters, and most importantly, you can FEEL it. That is one of the best elements of writing I absolutely love. For the sake of not spoiling it, I won't elaborate and go into depth on too much of the novel within this review, because I want you to find it out yourself.  All I have to say about this gem of a novel I found among the forest of stories stored in this vista and atlas of narratives, is that this novel is one of the few that actually grip me into suspense, humor, and attention without granting me false and short-term promises like "some other novels." I again encourage and urge you to give Dimensional Overhaul a try. In anyway, you will NOT be disappointed.

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