Enjoyed the read. At times it feels like you're writing up the events of an anime. Immortality is an interesting concept, looking forward to seeing how you use it. PS. Here's a cool looking cat for motivation :)

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I liked the backstory of the world, despite having just a few grammatical errors the overall story is pretty good I wouldn't care if I had any comments, for me the story is good I loved the story!

Not far enough in to really know what to rate the World Background. I'm enjoying how it's going so far, and the writing quality isn't that bad, for the most part. So I would like to edit it in my down time if you don't mind, Saromaru. I'm posting my first edit of Chapter 1 Paragraph 1, in the chapter comments, in a couple of minutes if you want to check it out.

I absolutely enjoyed reading this. The writing is unique in a very good way and I love how the author describes everything. This is a must read... definitely

Keep this up love this , great job author .a few mistakes here and there but it doesn't stop this from being a wonderful book, edit where it needs to be edited and perfect this

Yo bestie, nice novel kerja bagus![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

I can't believe I haven't made an review for this yet but here ya go my boy😎😤 %$%$%$%$%$%$%$%$%$%$%$%$%$%$%%$%$%$%$%%$%$%$%$%$%$%$%$%&$%$%$%$%$%$%$%$%$%$%$%$%$%$%$%%$%$%$%$%%$%$%$%$%$%%$%$%$%$%$%%$&$&$&$%$%$%%$%$%

Good novel. Good Author. Good stuff. Good story. Good concept. Good mc. Good writing. Author is good person. Overall it's good 👍👍[img=update][img=recommend]