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Azure_LeopardKing
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2022-04-07 02:54

Typical Cultivation and Transmigration Novel. Started off fine, but MC is still referred to as Andy. I dont care that was his previous worlds name and he doesnt feel like he belongs in this world. If the setting has only chinese names, adapt your MC to have a chinese name. If he wanted to pay homage to his name Andy here is a good name for you to use. An Di. Faking his suicide and adapting a new name is a good plot point. Since he doesnt want to be around that clan its good to be out on his own as he knows the story and its plot. But seriously to use an English name and no one thinks that it isnt weird? Had to drop because the name Andy was in nearly every paragraph each chapter. Very hard to get into a story that is supposed to be Chinese Cultivation but somehow isnt due to a single word.

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Melshan
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I agree with you

Azure_LeopardKing
Azure_LeopardKingLv14

Chapter 108 the author finally refers to the MC as An Di. Truly made me happy to see the MC finally is referred to by a chinese name.

Melshan:I agree with you
Melshan
MelshanLv7

Much better indeed and thanks for the info.

Azure_LeopardKing:Chapter 108 the author finally refers to the MC as An Di. Truly made me happy to see the MC finally is referred to by a chinese name.
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