Azure_LeopardKing

Also the age starting out at 36 and having to work though the lower leagues is more reasonable than the stories that have the MC be 25 coaching A Top Flight Club immediately.

Author, keep uploading this novel when you can. The first 8 chapters were good. I appreciate the thought and effort you put into this series. I Definitely like the fact it is a British Manager and not a translated series.

North Carolina State*

in the pokemon world they wouldn't be called Hawaiian shirts they would be called Alolan shirts

So far so good with this translation. I do like the use of his frist Reincarnation as a scientist from One Piece to explain why he is intelligent and I'm always happy to see someone dedicated to being a Dark Type Specialist.🙏👌🙌

Now this is a very good fanfic. I cant wait for more chapters. 🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

Those familial nicknames do not feel right translated into English. Maybe little J or like Jul the others just feel wrong to me

Stepbrother? you mean half-brother right?

Not going to lie, this book has me hooked within 15 chapters. Great job Author.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola