One of the best reincarnation stories I have read so far on this site. Realistic MC mindset wise. Only question I personally have is how exactly his new race looks. I imagined them as somwhat raptor like. Is that correct?

Writing: top-notch, very clear and descriptive, very little to no spelling issues. Updates: recently switched to daily updates and being honest I set my alarm clock to wake me up to be able to enjoy a new chapter first thing in the morning. Story: awesome, clear goal in mind, interesting developments, exciting fight scenes, addictive "kingdom building" even if for now, it's only about a small part of the swarm, everything one can look for in that type of novel. Character: again amazing, slowly accepts the change and embraces it, is not plagued as 80% of others on this site with the change-back-to-human-at-all-cost syndrome, he grows into his new role and does not start harem first chance he gets. 5/5 for me. World: very interesting and deep, while we still haven't seen much of it as it's currently nest-focused, what we have seen makes one curious and wanting more. One thing I'd like to know is how keelish species look, while there are descriptions some sort of quick art would be awesome because while I assume that keelish looks just like a green raptor, what makes khatif immodest without covering his/her body (chapter 76), I would assume they are still reptiles, just a bit more upright. What does true Keel look like, descriptions are ok, but imagination works differently for every person?

Unfortunate thing, just cartoon characters, there is no brutality or deep characters, the hero is sensitive and emotional like the little sister, although he became a monster and his clan as well that their behavior is the opposite like a group of cute cats love each other and try to eat some little mice, there was no need To make the hero and his clan a group of monsters who act with morals, love and kindness

Shameless self-promotion here. This is my first published novel, so I would be the first to admit that it is imperfect, but I think that it’s pretty good. Grammar is a pretty big deal for me, so I make sure that I keep punctuation and syntax pretty tight. I hate having my time wasted, and don't want to waste yours either. I won't be padding my story with anything simply to fill the chapters or spaces. The story starts to be more meaningful right around chapter 20, so if you aren’t invested by then, I don’t think you will be. I love constructive criticism, so feel free to reach out!

Great character development and world building! Not to mention overall amazing writing?! What more could you ask for? 5/5 for me. I really can't wait to see where this goes.

This is one of the beast reincarnation novels there are!! I just have 1 how does the MC looks like? The rest is good!! .....................................

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this book is really great principally for who like non-human mc Its easy to read and although most of the characters are simple, because they are animals, they have personality well developed and their interations. And the cherry on top of the cake is the mc who we read adapting to the new way of live, his "system" and his evolutions that are really good and exiting