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Master_Of_gu
Master_Of_guLv13yr
2021-12-26 03:00

Unfortunate thing, just cartoon characters, there is no brutality or deep characters, the hero is sensitive and emotional like the little sister, although he became a monster and his clan as well that their behavior is the opposite like a group of cute cats love each other and try to eat some little mice, there was no need To make the hero and his clan a group of monsters who act with morals, love and kindness

Ashlani’s Reincarnation

No_creative_name
4.6
3 Chs

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Kelator
KelatorLv1

The novel cover should be those cute looking dinosaurs from the land before time lol. Instead we got a t rex with blood stains.. really hate when the two don't match.

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Master_Of_gu
Master_Of_guLv1

Hahahaha you're right, that's unfortunate, there's no credibility, the wrapping needs to be changed. An embarrassing little dinosaur eating candy and playing in the sand.

Kelator:The novel cover should be those cute looking dinosaurs from the land before time lol. Instead we got a t rex with blood stains.. really hate when the two don't match.
3yr
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Shameless self-promotion here. This is my first published novel, so I would be the first to admit that it is imperfect, but I think that it’s pretty good. Grammar is a pretty big deal for me, so I make sure that I keep punctuation and syntax pretty tight. I hate having my time wasted, and don't want to waste yours either. I won't be padding my story with anything simply to fill the chapters or spaces. The story starts to be more meaningful right around chapter 20, so if you aren’t invested by then, I don’t think you will be. I love constructive criticism, so feel free to reach out!

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