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Okay, since asking reviews is generic today, let me give you an honest one. First, the book cover and title. Actually, Webnovel caters MORE cliche parts on the titles since it intrigued the readers way too much by just reading in the title. We have more popular novels on the same name, that has Tyrant, Alpha or even CEO on it. It's literally what the readers like and we should give it to them. The cover seemed not intriguing to me as it was, or I was just amused with certain covers that has kisses, hugs, cuddles, or even lovers having their quality time in the covers. As for the title, it's vague. Second, I don't have an issue with punctuation and capitalization, but I do have a comment with the synopsis. It lacked some information that the readers want to read for the first time before jumping into the first chapter. Synopsis is the third ingredient to a popular novel. We have to pay attention to the details placed in the front view. Or else, they wouldn't be curious with what is behind the title, cover, and the overall theme of the story. Next, I like the descriptions, but the first chapter might bore me out if I wasn't paying attention to the details. Mostly, some of the passages in popular novels include an introduction of what the character was, or what was her weakness, before jumping into the set conflicts at the beginning. Still, I'm impressed. Maybe a little review to the front page and you're good to go. Good luck on your future endeavors!

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Thank you so much for the honest review! [img=recommend]