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Akira_Monadelle
Akira_MonadelleLv133yr
2021-10-21 08:39

This was a lot more interesting and entertaining than I thought it'd be. The plot was like a breath of fresh air, it was creatively thought out and nicely depicted. I especially liked that the chapters weren't too long. However, there were a few errors. The grammar was good but some sentences lacked the proper end marks and some words that were to be capitalized, weren't capitalized. Also, some aspects of the synopsis contradicted with some parts of the the story, I was a bit confused by it. Overall, this was an entertaining read. Not exactly my cup of tea but any romance avid reader that's into getting back together novels would be intrigued by the love story of Nina and Justin. I realized that you had Jungkook as your profile picture so I'm guessing you're a fellow army. Armys should always look out for each other so I'm leaving you with a small gift as encouragement to keep doing your vest with this work of art. [img=recommend]

The Supermodel's Ex-Fiancé

Lazy_Authoress
4.4
69 Chs

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Lazy_Authoress
Lazy_AuthoressLv3

A very honest review but i loved it anyways! Thank you for pointing out my mistakes and errors, i will surely correct those areas! And thanks for the gift, fellow Army😍

3yr
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Miss_Elated03
Miss_Elated03Lv3

I love romance novels and this is not an exemption 😍!!! I can't wait to see where it heads, with more chapters of course. Intriguing plot and good building. Goodluck author, keep it up.

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Megana4
Megana4Lv2

Romance novels are my cup of tea and so far this book is on my favorite list. The author’s writing style is incredible, vocabulary is exquisite, the story development is not too fast nor too slow. The main characters are amazingly portrayed and are developed slowly in each chapter. Can't wait to read more. Highly recommended!! Keep up the good work, author!!

3yr
Leigh_Green
Leigh_GreenLv1

It's a fun read about a supermodel who has to get over after dumping her boyfriend who impregnated another woman after a one-night stand. And what's more entertaining here is the fact that her ex-boyfriend's sister is now engaged to her best guy friend. Ah, the confusion. Writing is good but needs to be edited. The chapters were added simultaneously five days ago. The pace of the story is just fair enough. The characters are described but not described in details except for Justin. Setting is located in Nova City. Interesting and intriguing.

3yr
PhoenixAlpha_Duke
PhoenixAlpha_DukeLv2

What an exciting read! So easy to loose yourself in the reality of the characters. The dept of creativity here is amazing and captivating! Please never stop writing! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

3yr
scarletpaine16
scarletpaine16Lv10

Great plot setting and character modification. I recommend it for anyone who wishes to read. Nice write up Keep up the good work, dear author

3yr
Phantoms_are_true
Phantoms_are_trueLv1

I'm not a fan of romance but I would spend my time reading this. It's worth my time. The words used, for a person like me who isn't an English native speaker, I can benefit a lot from this. The plot is intriguing, it gets me glued to it. Love it author, keep it up!

3yr
_Jaeee
_JaeeeLv2

The first chapter was already as good as it is, what more for the next chapters in line? I really enjoyed reading it, Author! It intrigues me at how will the story of Nina and Justin unfold from here on out!

3yr
Wendysyri
WendysyriLv14

Meh. Story feels rushed, with ideas just thrown in randomly. Dialogue needs work. Feels like a bunch of teenagers arguing instead of ppl in the late 20-30. This is your typical, “cold, Intelligent, handsome male lead, that contradicts his character by being too stupid to figure out a simple scheme”

2yr
Ice_Princesss
Ice_PrincesssLv4

I'm not a big fan of romance, but I do enjoy relaxing and reading a romance based book in the process. This story did not disappoint. I loved every chapter and every character I came across. The plot is nice so I'm definitely keeping a close eye on this.

3yr
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