Review Detail of Akira_Monadelle in Perfection in imperfections

I really liked the plot of this novel, it was very fresh and unique. The novel overall was an interesting one, the situations were very realistic and the author's wording of the situations really pulled me in and immediately appealed to my emotions. However, there were quite a few errors throughout. The errors fortunately weren't too major so it was still an easy read. The two prologues though were a bit messy, it took me a while to figure out what was going on in both of them. Chapter 1 and onwards were written a lot better and only had a small amount of errors but it was still just as confusing. Transitions from one scene and chapter to another could use some work, to prevent confusion. It needs to be a bit smoother. I think the author should label the point of views too because sometimes I have no idea who's point of view the story is being told from. Overall, this was a very nice novel. I really loved how realistic it was and the author depicted it perfectly. [img=recommend]