Review Detail of JJ_Prakoso in Perfection in imperfections

Here are my honest thoughts about this novel based on what I read so far: I really like the author writing style because it's quite smooth for the flow and pretty easy to read. I also like the author used quite a lot of expressive words and little bit of metaphor to make the read more exciting. While the character so far, I do really like that they are all distinct with one another and have their own interesting problem. Jeremy as a character quite interesting with his problem with break up and Natasha with her child and her recent father deaths is quite intriguing to follow. I also can see some potential of Jeremy and Natasha development when they stay at the same house especially these two people are broken heart or have a similar theme for their character growth. Therefore their relationship and interaction would be the most intriguing and exciting point for the novel and I hope the author can elaborate more in the next chapter to make it more fascinating even though their interaction so far is quite fine. However, there is a little bit of drawbacks and it's actually easy to be fix, also I am sorry to say this and it's okay for you to disagree. Which is I think the introduction of Natasha's father death needed to be elaborate more especially because when a characters die, it will be better if there is more characterization for him such as flashback about his relationship with Natasha. Therefore, it can make her death father moment more impactful for the story and Nathasa development of copping with her father. Overall, it's quite interesting read for me and thank you very much. Keep up the good work!!