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Vandumbo
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2021-10-14 11:05

It had potential, but I do not think of this as a good story. The chapter until now are just drama, MC is child orphan, living in an orphanage. They go to hospital, MC has vampire quirk. "Oh no, he has a villain quirk", MC is shunned (worse than manhua lol), MC get attacked by plot and fight back, scared orphanage manager call governement to take him, MC is taken (let himself be taken even thought he half-knew it) to brainwashing etablishment masquerading as a "evil quirk retablishment institute" or something like that. MC meet Himiko (lol). MC wants Himiko, so MC become Himiko's friend, then more than friend. MC gets tortured for plot (bad guy trying to brainwash yadayada). MC plan to escape with Himiko. The... drama is kinda pointless, MC can't stop thinking he will kill everyone, get revenge and all that, but I think it will takes years before it take place, and the story is goign forward at snail pace. It takes time. And pointless drama. It would be so much, so MUCH MORE BETTER (in my opinion) if MC was shown directly in his adulthood, or teens. We would know MC as a villain, then little by little reveal thing on him (like in Classroom of the elites) I do not think you will like this story, you can still give it a try

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Fish_m
Fish_mLv3

I agree with you . I think the story is too much slow .

Miyoko
MiyokoLv3

Agree

Riekoo
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DreamCreator
DreamCreatorLv11

Agree

Spc_Monk
Spc_MonkLv5

I agree . I don't even think thr author can finish this ff because the amount of bs he threw. I think it's close to dropping this ff. want to give melancholy vibe but all that shown was dramatic bs ...

DeLuque
DeLuqueLv1

Hermano eres un salvavidas

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