Review Detail of the_goat_4880 in The Eye of Blessed

Many parts just either don't make sense, or are poorly written (sentence structure and word choice) would be my only real complaint about the story. The fact that the author wrote the main character as an extension of herself, wether true or not, added something else to this fiction that I liked. The characters actions can be quite humourous, in that they act ridiculously and that is enjoyable to read (even if it may not be what you were aiming for), as someone who doesn't enjoy straight romance I can say this novel is pretty good for what it is.