These types of novels with OP MC are very enjoyable to read... -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Strange Human
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LIKEIKR it’s almost unbearable I haven’t found a proper book on this site in ages I don’t even care about grammar I just want it to make sense, not treating people as objects unless it makes sense for the plot and no needless racism it doesnt make the novel better
Toxic_318:Ah yes you read hundreds of these novels filled with nationalism and racism plus senseless face slapping and tell me if it's enjoyable
It is SADDENING AND UNREAL that an author HAS TO ASK FOR PEOPLE NOT SWINING AND HAZING HIS OR HER WORK!!... :-/ BECAUSE CRITICISM IS SUPPOSED TO BE CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM AND CREATIVE NARRATIVE WRITING IS SUPPOSED TO RECEIVE QUALIFIED CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM AND SUGGESTIONS FROM THE DISLIKING PARTY! AND NOT be used to unload negativity without a welfounded stated reason! MY OPINION: GREAT WORK I LOVE IT!! BUT PLEASE PROVIDE SOME BACKSTORY MATERIAL OF ADVANCED AND ENLARGING THE CHARACTERS PERSONAE VOLUMINOUS LARGE AMOUNTS AND INCORPORATE THE CHARACTERS FAMILIES AND SOCIAL CIRCUITS INTO HAVING KNOWN AND WORKED TOGETHER WITH THE OTHER MAIN CHARACTERS BACKTORIES FAMILY AND FRIENDS AND ALLIES OF FAMILY MEMBERS! SO WE GET MORE COMPLEX LOST CONTINENT HISTORY AND LOTS OF IT!! HENCE EXPLAINING FOR EXAMPLE MORE IN DEPTH WHY SO THE MANY MANY MANY GODS SEE LIVING INDIVIDUALS AS NUMBERS AND THINGS! :-) That would definitely make your story more understandable and interesting! Sincerely Kim SilverHorse