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Ctrlkris
CtrlkrisLv143yr
2021-12-26 07:19

This book will be better if it had a good proof reader because the way it change from his to her is just too much man is hard to know who is meant to be talking sometimes

My Sister Exposed My Identity As A Villainous Godfather

Taunt Monster
3.9
205 Chs

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KamikazeDrew
KamikazeDrewLv5

It's the translation group Endless Fantasy Translation, they ruin every webnovel they touch and it seems like they are the only ones translating on this site anymore. If I see that they are the ones doing the translating, I just automatically skip it.

2yr
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PayDay
PayDayLv14

I dont get why he is jealous. He got her through college working 3 jobs. Shes successful because of you, those would be OUR accomplishments. Also if she can afford to pay for the 2 of them why doesn't he start bettering himself, like looking for a good job or studying? I think what makes this disappointing is he just gets thrown a system even though he and his sister are in such a good situation now. It'd be more interesting is if the way he got his sister through college was because he was a crime lord and then she somehow found out.

3yr

Munga_Munga_254
Munga_Munga_254Lv4

Wow i hope it gets picked...i love that mc will be a villain behind the scenes 💪💪💪💪💪💪it will be interesting thing to read... this month trial read are not bad

3yr
Ancient_
Ancient_Lv14

Didn't expect him to really become a villain and not a hero who became a villain by saying they're misunderstood and giving excuses like the world isn't black and white. However, his sect principles are really dumb.

3yr
Empyrium
EmpyriumLv15

So the novel is good I like it, for me it is a new idea, but minus -3 stars for the gender mistakes. His sister is changing gender so fast it isn't nice to read, I mean really if you translate a novel at least try to do it properply

3yr
Bleed_the_gods
Bleed_the_godsLv2

raws please

3yr
Darkload
DarkloadLv13

I like this Novel but it gets -3 stars, I mean really if you translate a novel at least try to edit it properly

3yr
StrawTheMan
StrawTheManLv15

Im liking it so far! there was a chapter that repeated 3x though which was pretty annoying but the story itself is great! Definitely would recommend

3yr
seadewSK
seadewSKLv4

could not get past the translation. "there were factories not used by factories, gyms used as currency" was too much for me to handle. Even cursory editing done by a middle schooler would have been enough to fix the incorrect pronouns, calling a bike a donkey, and other random incomprehensible sentences.

2yr
alphavires
alphaviresLv15

Honestly, the story is great, the development is good, the world building is subpar BUTTT, BUTTT THE TRANSLATION IS BLOODY HOORIBLE, LIKE, ITS BASICALLY A TRASHY MTL COPY PASTE

2yr
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