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Aoki_AkuAuthor3yr
2021-10-08 05:05

Obligatory Author Review. Do you like system novels, with lots of adventuring? You will like this one. At least that's what I would like to think anyhow.

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AshtynKCLv14

ps: you can use it as the synopsis

yb48Lv14

is mc beta type or not? because there is a romance tag??

its_LLv3

is it harem?

Aoki_AkuAuthor

Not really. But our op is surrounded by women who mostly have no sexual interest in him.

its_L:is it harem?
its_LLv3

if he is just surrounded that's ok. i just don't like harems where mc will go around and get every other beautiful girl that really just destroy the story

Aoki_Aku:Not really. But our op is surrounded by women who mostly have no sexual interest in him.
ChaosAsura0Lv2

But will he have a relationship with more then one female or just 1. (Hope it’s 1)

Aoki_Aku:Not really. But our op is surrounded by women who mostly have no sexual interest in him.
ChaosAsura0Lv2

Hope it’s 1 fml 🤦🏽

Aoki_Aku:Not really. But our op is surrounded by women who mostly have no sexual interest in him.
Aoki_AkuAuthor

I plan on 1. Though I can't guarantee he won't end up at zero or even temporarily 2. Don't count the Felian Nemu, she wants to sleep ON him, not with him in that other sense. She's just protective of her spot.

ChaosAsura0:But will he have a relationship with more then one female or just 1. (Hope it’s 1)
ChaosAsura0Lv2

Oh kl good know I hope you stick with 1. It’s going good with just 1. I don’t want adding another to the mix to ruin it.

Aoki_Aku:I plan on 1. Though I can't guarantee he won't end up at zero or even temporarily 2. Don't count the Felian Nemu, she wants to sleep ON him, not with him in that other sense. She's just protective of her spot.
Tsol_3785Lv11

You mean Romance = Beta, are you a robot then?

yb48:is mc beta type or not? because there is a romance tag??
Lazy_Chicken_GodLv13

I don't know if I should take it as a yes or no. But I would like if there is a harem.

Aoki_Aku:Not really. But our op is surrounded by women who mostly have no sexual interest in him.
ArashiTenebrisLv5

I suggest you check 'terrible writing advice' channel there, so you know how 'not' to write that topic and fall into same mistake lot of new author make (check the honest thought version in older video if possible), I notice a review about 'Tell' problem so I share some quick video that can give you idea about it: ---------------------------------------------------- + "Show, Don't Tell" by Julie Freeman, it a dummy guide and example -- + "Show vs Tell - When to Show" and "Show vs Tell - When to Tell" video from 'Writing with Jenna Moreci' channel (a very good writing advice channel), hope it help

Aoki_Aku:I plan on 1. Though I can't guarantee he won't end up at zero or even temporarily 2. Don't count the Felian Nemu, she wants to sleep ON him, not with him in that other sense. She's just protective of her spot.
DamocIesLv12

aprox. how many chapters...? please spoil me author Sama. nobody does good summoner novels, and this is one of my weak spots. ahh how I love summoner and GOOD dungeon management stories. 5k CHAPTERS!!..?

Xanarcy_LeoLv2

As long as there is no simp or harem

AncientGodDragonLv5

Piece of advice to Author. Give all of you chapters a name. It may sound trivial but many people pick up random chapters by their names and see what's happening to decide if to give the novel a try. This is especially true for web novels. Same for me too especially after finding the 1st couple of chapters quite boring . Not everyone has the patience to stick around for 100 or even 40 chapters solely based off some reviews or author's notes in summaries. It will take maybe a day or 2 for you but i believe it will help your novel quite a bit. Rest is up to you.

Dylan_Peck_0320Lv3

great novel just not enough obstacles to pull attention for a long read. great progression but not enough struggle for power. I get how he accepts it easily but how do others accept do easily and why isn't there any distress or situations with this

bringer_of_DuskLv2

will the mc fight on his own? or will he be nerfed and his summons will do the work for him?

Hera_PagiwayanLv1

nice story

THE_CURSED_1224Lv2

MY MOST REQUIRED ANSWER, I WILL GIVE A TRY TO READ

Aoki_Aku:Not really. But our op is surrounded by women who mostly have no sexual interest in him.
TheLegendaryTLv3

Quick question is main character manly using a bow ,because I don’t realy enjoy that style of fighting.

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