Review Detail of SomethingMalefic in HP: The Secret Heir.

honestly terrible. writing quality: 1 its horrendous. wrong words are used constantly. grammar and punctuation are also terrible. author shortens names to things like prof, voldy, ect. and it feels like ur reading a draft. story development: way to fast paced, there's nothing entertaining just plot. but terrible plot. incredibly unrealistic. its like a 5 year old got sudden inspiration and had to jot all his ideas down as fast as possible. character design: conservation is bland and boring, the characters are like robots without emotion. its like they try to micic humans but fail. I'd not be surprised if a lizard wrote this.