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This story is actually promising! I love your style though you could use some editing on the grammar and punctuation, BUT your style covers all that up. I would a 100% recommend Grammarly for some help! I love the details you put in the background, symbolizing a lot of stuff and foreshadowing future events. I have hella theories and expectations. I hope you exceed them all!!

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THE ABANDONED ALPHA'S SLAVE MATE

AuthorShizuka

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thank you❤❤