Great story overall. The characters, Demetrius and Blue, were very likable. I'm still left wondering where Maxen went, but... that's a story for another day. Not much to complain about - pace was good, world background wasn't fully expanded on yet since there are only 11 chapters, but in retrospect a great novel. Definitely has potential to win the contest - best of luck!
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