Hi ! Shameless author here! It is the first novel that I am really writting, so don't hesitate to ask me question or anything here ! English is not my first language, so I will make effort to improve continuously myself. This novel will be quite long, I have already the end, so do not worry, I will finish it. To give you all an appetizer, the world of Uradan is a parallel world at the real one, and Rohan will be able to switch between them freely. How ? Why ? When ? And what is inside this world ? Well I will not spoil you 🙄.
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LIKEIf you are refering to the 19th chapter then I can't say anything to you, the mc is 14 at this point. Will he be ruttless without any reason? no! Will he be ruthless in the futur? yes. And actually faster than you think. That is call growing up. But in any case please be aware of your manner, and don't insult like you have done in your comments. You do not like my novel? Sure. But you don't have to insult me or my work, thank you.
TheTrickster12:what a disappointment this is the second novel in webnovel to completely disappoint me especially since I had such high expectations of it.
The 19th chapter has already told me everything about the future of this novel and I doubt that you'd make the mc go back on his words about not killing his enemies but I do agree the insult was unnecessary as it was caused by rage of my favorability of this novel going down in the dumps.
Le_Krackeen:If you are refering to the 19th chapter then I can't say anything to you, the mc is 14 at this point. Will he be ruttless without any reason? no! Will he be ruthless in the futur? yes. And actually faster than you think. That is call growing up. But in any case please be aware of your manner, and don't insult like you have done in your comments. You do not like my novel? Sure. But you don't have to insult me or my work, thank you.
Actually you can't be more wrong, the story is about Rohan, a son of a nobleman who will travel around and will more or less discover the truth of this world. Because of what he will see, because of his encounters, because of the world, he will be more ruthless. It can already be seen in the chapter 50 or so. If you continue you'll see that he simply would have no choice but to kill. Like I said, it is because my character is growing up. For now he is still a naive boy.
TheTrickster12:The 19th chapter has already told me everything about the future of this novel and I doubt that you'd make the mc go back on his words about not killing his enemies but I do agree the insult was unnecessary as it was caused by rage of my favorability of this novel going down in the dumps.
hmm if what you've said is true then I'll give it another chance as I was really interested in the story earlier was just extremely disappointed by what I've read
Le_Krackeen:Actually you can't be more wrong, the story is about Rohan, a son of a nobleman who will travel around and will more or less discover the truth of this world. Because of what he will see, because of his encounters, because of the world, he will be more ruthless. It can already be seen in the chapter 50 or so. If you continue you'll see that he simply would have no choice but to kill. Like I said, it is because my character is growing up. For now he is still a naive boy.