Let's start with the synopsis.... Just like Author described in the synopsis- It's a story were mc is the villain and he will destroy all haven-child, I mean protagonists. Well at lest that's what I think... I am currently at chapter 52. In those 52 chapters only 10 days has passed... yup only 10 days has passed since mc came to know that he is a villain, which was in first chapter. So, I would say that the pace in which the story is progressing is very slow, very very slow. Another depressing thing is that Mc is not a villain but more like Protagonists. Why you ask? Well, you see.... for the past 52 chapters all mc did was run after girl and adding girl too his harem, while giving excuses like saying that it was to increase his strength, or to control the big families, or saying that he would steal all the heroines of the protagonists... So, all in all, what I'm trying to say is that, for the first 52 chapters all Mc did was run behind girls and adding them in his harem. He already added 4 members, while 2 more are in the process to be added... Oh and he is also thinking about how add more girls. And another depressing thing is that, no protagonists has appeared up until now. And I don't think any will appear anytime soon... maybe after another 100 chapter. Well. And I don't think mc will stop collecting women anytime soon. Pretty disappointing. Sorry author don't mind my review. I am just frustrated to see that all mc doing collecting women. All in all, not my cup of tea.
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LIKEVery wrong, my friend. The story will improve a lot after the time jumps, and you will be surprised when you see what the Mc will do to me, the Children of Destiny, and this remains my personal opinion, and you may like it or not like . Sorry if there are some or many grammatical errors in my comment, as this is not my mother tongue
md_rizvi:And how am I wrong....
I too dropped the story after 20 chapters, when he romances his own mother, and plans to marry half sister. there is some background about conflicts between two families, and honestly the conflict seems hard to understand, and grammar quality drops in those chapters. I dropped after it. After reading your review that even after ch 52, he is running after more girls, i made right decision by dropping the novel