Item: Novel Moved: Search: Became the Broken third son
Rating: 5

BlackRoseDragonLv152yr

2021-11-17 10:44

honestly incredibly well written. when I saw it was new i wasnt expecting much but its soo good. love the main character and dante is everything so far

Novel Moved: Search: Became the Broken third son

Rain_Corn

4.9

1 Chs

Liked by 1 people

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Rain_CornAuthor

Thank you BlackRoseDragon. I have appreciated your constant support even through my long hiatus. You are one of the reasons this story is still going since I want my supporters to be able to read more. The story may become a bit darker and heavy a few times, but I will try my best to keep it in the same writing style, so it is still easy to read and make sure it is balanced with less heavy story as well. I hope you will continue to enjoy it.

2yr

BlackRoseDragonLv15

I really appreciated u for coming back!!

Rain_Corn:Thank you BlackRoseDragon. I have appreciated your constant support even through my long hiatus. You are one of the reasons this story is still going since I want my supporters to be able to read more. The story may become a bit darker and heavy a few times, but I will try my best to keep it in the same writing style, so it is still easy to read and make sure it is balanced with less heavy story as well. I hope you will continue to enjoy it.

2yr

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LanceeLv1

Wow!. This is new to me, i love your creative idea and how you brought it to life. A fascinating storyline filled with warmth and the theme itself is admirable. I know it's just two chapters but you are onto something. One of the best novel I've read in webnovel, your approach of this world you've created is sooo inspiring. And i say these words from an Author who really cares about new original work and your work is just amazing. Keep on writing and share it with the world. Pure Gold.

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Alright so the first few chapters are getting a small revision to some paragraphs and some extra flavor added to them. Some of the flow feels a bit broken sometimes so I wish to add in some better transitions to fix this as I want the reader to have an easy understanding and light feeling when reading it. Who is the Male lead? - hopefully, you (the readers) won't dislike my choice, as it may not be apparent yet. I am not a romantic who believes in love at first sight.

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The only real complaint I have for this novel at the moment is the frequency of updates. The writing quality is fairly high with no obnoxious errors--I can tell that the author proofreads their work. There are a few weird romance shenanigans here and there, like, a character automatically falling for the MC because they didn't react to their scars, but it feels fairly grounded for the most part. It has a plotline outside of the romance which is a + for me, and I look forward to where it's going. Great work!

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I TURNED GAY AFTER A DRUNKEN NIGHT

“What's done is done! Let's just forget it!” He said and acted nonchalantly, even though he was cowering in fear because something was telling him that the stranger in front of him didn't intend to let go. The man's frown increases and Hayden swears that the temperature in the room increases multiple times. After winning over his heart and stealing his first, this boy wanted to avoid responsibility, which made Zenos annoyed. “You want to run away from me?” He asked in annoyance, and suddenly Hayden found himself under the man without even knowing how. “I'm just…” Hayden wasn't able to finish his words before he was domineeringly kissed by the stranger. Zenos used his left hand to pin Hayden's hand on top of Hayden's head effortlessly. Hayden tried to struggle and blocked the stranger's tongue from dominating his mouth by pressing his lips against each other stubbornly, but the man unexpectedly bit Hayden's bottom lips, making Hayden yelp in pain. The man used that chance to clean all the taste of strawberries in Hayden's mouth, while his right hand continued to stroke Hayden's body wantonly. When Hayden was starting to go dizzy due to shortness of breath, he was released by the man's assault. He breathed in and out rapidly and thanked heaven for the chance to live again. “You can't run away from me… You are mine” Zenos growled into Hayden's neck possessively. Hayden felt a shiver run through his spine after hearing the stranger's words. His breath hitched as the man licked his earlobe and kissed his neck with extreme familiarity, domineeringly. “Mine,” the stranger proclaimed again. The stranger gave a low curse word and rolled off Hayden's shivering sensitive body, “I'll spare you because you're still in pain. You won't be as lucky next time” he said and lifted Hayden's chin to peck him one more time while Hayden stared dumbfounded. Cover isn't mine, found online My new bl novel is out: The Journey Of Chasing After The Transmigrated Straight Shou

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Not enough ratings

263 Chs

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Sofie_Vert01 · LGBT+

4.4

158 Chs

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4.5

122 Chs

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4.8

255 Chs

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Andru_9788 · LGBT+

5.0

702 Chs

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4.8

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Not enough ratings

97 Chs

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Tyramisu · LGBT+

4.8

1176 Chs