Item: Novel Moved: Search: Became the Broken third son
Rating: 4.8

BotBrainLv112yr

2021-12-21 19:48

The only real complaint I have for this novel at the moment is the frequency of updates. The writing quality is fairly high with no obnoxious errors--I can tell that the author proofreads their work. There are a few weird romance shenanigans here and there, like, a character automatically falling for the MC because they didn't react to their scars, but it feels fairly grounded for the most part. It has a plotline outside of the romance which is a + for me, and I look forward to where it's going. Great work!

Novel Moved: Search: Became the Broken third son

Rain_Corn

4.9

1 Chs

Liked by 3 people

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Rain_CornAuthor

Thank you for your comment, I appreciate the review! I hope to fix the update rate again real soon. I am currently in this moment working on chapters to start releasing regularly again. I hope to improve the shenanigans, if anything at least make them either more shenanigans or more profound.

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BotBrainLv11

Yeah, shenanigans aren't a bad thing! I think it could definitely be played off a bit more comedically at times since the characters in the story are kind of serious 24/7, though. Look forward to the updates <3

Rain_Corn:Thank you for your comment, I appreciate the review! I hope to fix the update rate again real soon. I am currently in this moment working on chapters to start releasing regularly again. I hope to improve the shenanigans, if anything at least make them either more shenanigans or more profound.

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